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You know, I don't know whether or not to decide if the 'main character' is the killer or tried to help the woman. Or maybe he's responsible for her death and had metaphorical blood on his hands! What if he's blaming himself for her death? You know what; how 'bout you decide?

I've decided for this to be about a person whom blames himself/herself for their lover's death. Anyways, hope you enjoy! :)

Poem (C) C.J.Smith/ 2013

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0rvel Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

stained red.

 

So I take out a knife

and end my own life

as the roses and violets do

we all die too.

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Eevee1999 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
Now I wish I'd thought of that... :ashamed:
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0rvel Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

=D

I couldn't of thought of it if you hadn't made the first 2 Paragraphs!

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Eevee1999 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Student Writer
:huggle:
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0rvel Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

Poems for the win!

 

HUGZ! Huggle! 

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OurFallenAngel Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my.. *gasp*
Beautiful twist at the end. I love the last verse.
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Eevee1999 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :hug: I really appreciate you liking it :)
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maybe-paper-hearts Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Photographer
wow! it's totally amazing! 
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Eevee1999 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! :)
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JaniPanani Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist
What a plot twist in the end! I was waiting for one of those sugary love stories but this one was melancholy enough for even me to enjoy!
The ending's definitely what makes the poem have such an impact; so many ways to look at it.
I also like how you're analyzing it in the description; someone went way deeper than they first intended huh! :D
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